Saturday, December 24, 2011

Unrelenting

Upon first sight with a first breath of new life,
Everything seems at ease for the moment.
A new time has risen from the ashes of the past,
Keep both feet on your path and learn to own it.
When led astray to fall away has no purpose,
It's irrelevance lies within a lack of willpower.
To fade away as sunlight upon the growing night,
Pointless, as you die more every second, minute, hour.

10 comments:

  1. Makes you think...
    I like where this is going.
    Followed.

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  2. This is my personal way of explaining a change or a new beginning in life. It's about that point in life where you understand what it is you ultimately wish to accomplish in life and setting out on the right path. If you think you should give up and quit on your goals then it's like throwing your life away, which is completely pointless as it's basically like mental or emotional suicide.

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  3. Hey thank you very much for following followed back! Did you write that yourself its very good!

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  4. I did. Thank you I appreciate it. I just wrote this prior to posting it. I like to share what I write because everyone construes them differently and get inspiration and meaning from them.

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  5. Enjoyed the post, and hope you keep posting! Writing is def a powerful tool and can inspire people in a lot of different ways

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  6. Thank you to all of you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will definitely be posting more in time. Feel free to check back every so often and read a few things I write.

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  7. I hope I can discover what I want to accomplish in life soon. I feel like I've been wandering astray for a while now.

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  8. very well written, man.
    following you

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